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Elle Mott's avatar

This is a goody that I wish I had seen/read when it was first shared. My m/s is of a woman whose life I describe during the mid twentieth century. It is with the line editor now and I can only imagine it will come back to me full of comments to include more sensory details. I like the examples you give as they show me the goal to achieve when applying the facts of the time. I will save this goody to come back to when my m/s comes back to me. Thanks!

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Bonny Reichert's avatar

Love this, Kim. As a food writer (and food-writing instructor) I’m thinking about sensory writing all the time, and trying not to get stuck in taste alone. As you mention, a little synesthesia goes a long way.

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Peggy Walt's avatar

Terrific, Kim -got me thinking about the changes in smells and sounds in our world - inspiring! thanks

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Deborah A.M. Phillips's avatar

Hi Kim , I have read several Lauren Groff books - loved Matrix especially. It is now out in French, with a better cover than the English version is one is interested in book covers. I plan to include your exercises in my morning writing routine. Thank you.

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Rona Maynard's avatar

Inspiring examples presented with clarity and power.

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Adelle Purdham's avatar

Dear Kim,

This is a fantastic resource, with excellent examples, and has inspired a sense writing exercise with my students. Thank you!

- Adelle:)

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Oksana Kuryliw's avatar

Kim.

Thank you so much. What an invaluable resource you are. And what rich resources you provide. I truly appreciate your hard work and research .

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Jeffrey Yamaguchi's avatar

Fantastic newsletter Kim - really through-provoking insights on sensory perception and description, how challenging it really is given all the nuance, context, timeframes, and points-of-view, but when you get it right, wow, it can make something really come alive and electrify the reading experience.

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Kim Pittaway's avatar

Thanks Jeff!

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